Story revisions
After getting some superb feedback and suggestions on the plot of Moonshadows from my friend and fellow builder and Ossian team member Alazander, I spent a few hours today revising some of the plot of my chef-d'oeuvre. ;) Lots of pieces tie together very nicely now, and while it wasn't bad before, now some of the parts which weren't quite so strong are really good. I basically added another dimension to the central story, a subplot that just makes everthing more interesting...I also elaborated the personalities and motivations of a few of the main characters, including the eventual final villain of the adventure, and I clarified some aspects of the plot that weren't easy to understand at first...overall, just good brainstorming for what I truly believe will be a really enjoyable epic adventure. :)
In related news, I got the screenshot page up and running for Moonshadows--check it out. People that have been following this blog for awhile may notice that all the screenies of those early rural areas, the first I released, aren't there--that's because the areas those screenshots were of have been recreated now that I have a better understanding of the toolset and how to do area design. :) I'll have pics for the new areas in the near future, and will announce additions to that page here.
In related news, I got the screenshot page up and running for Moonshadows--check it out. People that have been following this blog for awhile may notice that all the screenies of those early rural areas, the first I released, aren't there--that's because the areas those screenshots were of have been recreated now that I have a better understanding of the toolset and how to do area design. :) I'll have pics for the new areas in the near future, and will announce additions to that page here.
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